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diff --git a/2022/cfp.md b/2022/cfp.md
index 04da5719..f3626590 100644
--- a/2022/cfp.md
+++ b/2022/cfp.md
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ stream of quick ideas followed by lots of conversation over IRC and/or
Q&A sessions, with occasional deep dives into topics that many people
might find interesting or useful.
-As you think about your talk/session, consider what you can share in:
+As you think about your talk, consider what you can share in:
- **Up to 10 minutes total:** What is the core idea? What do you want
people to do or remember? You can show just enough to get people
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ be done by the streamer if the streamer is interested and able to) and
another volunteer to help check in speakers of upcoming live sessions.
If you are interested and able to help with any of the above, please
-reach out to us and say hi; we'd love to have your help!
+reach out to us; we'd love to have your help!
In addition to the [emacsconf-discuss](https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/emacsconf-discuss) list, feel free to subscribe to
[emacsconf-org](https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/emacsconf-org) as well, for discussions related to organizing the
diff --git a/2022/cfp.org b/2022/cfp.org
index 00ec7423..dc1df5df 100644
--- a/2022/cfp.org
+++ b/2022/cfp.org
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ stream of quick ideas followed by lots of conversation over IRC and/or
Q&A sessions, with occasional deep dives into topics that many people
might find interesting or useful.
-As you think about your talk/session, consider what you can share in:
+As you think about your talk, consider what you can share in:
- *Up to 10 minutes total:* What is the core idea? What do you want
people to do or remember? You can show just enough to get people
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ be done by the streamer if the streamer is interested and able to) and
another volunteer to help check in speakers of upcoming live sessions.
If you are interested and able to help with any of the above, please
-reach out to us and say hi; we'd love to have your help!
+reach out to us; we'd love to have your help!
In addition to the [[https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/emacsconf-discuss][emacsconf-discuss]] list, feel free to subscribe to
[[https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/emacsconf-org][emacsconf-org]] as well, for discussions related to organizing the