summaryrefslogtreecommitdiffstats
diff options
context:
space:
mode:
-rw-r--r--2022/cfp.org10
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/2022/cfp.org b/2022/cfp.org
index 4bad204e..2e451119 100644
--- a/2022/cfp.org
+++ b/2022/cfp.org
@@ -70,13 +70,13 @@ join the chat using [[ircs://irc.libera.chat:6697/emacsconf][your favourite IRC
All kinds of people use Emacs for all kinds of things. We'd love it
if EmacsConf 2022 could highlight interesting perspectives and reflect
-the diversity of our community. If you know someone who might have a
-good idea for a talk, please reach out to them and encourage them to
+the diversity of our community. If you know someone who might have
+a good idea for a talk, please reach out to them and encourage them to
submit a proposal. Many people (especially from underrepresented
groups such as women, people of colour, non-developers, etc.) might
-not consider themselves expert enough to share their thoughts. If you
-let them know that you value their knowledge and maybe even suggest
-something that you think others would like to hear more about, they
+not consider themselves proficient enough to share their thoughts. If
+you let them know that you value their knowledge and maybe even
+suggest something that you think others would like to hear about, they
may realize that they have something worth sharing and that we would
love to hear from them.