Reword some points in email

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/2022/organizers-notebook/index.org b/2022/organizers-notebook/index.org
index 93ffcb6d..7194f576 100644
--- a/2022/organizers-notebook/index.org
+++ b/2022/organizers-notebook/index.org
@@ -214,18 +214,20 @@ There are two ways to upload your talk${plural} this year:
 - Web-based: https://ftp-upload.emacsconf.org , password emacsconf
 - FTP: host: ftp-upload.emacsconf.org, port: 21, username: anonymous, folder: upload-here
 
-If you upload slides and other resources, we can include them on the
-talk page when your talk goes live. If you happen to have a script,
-please include that as well. We can use it to help with captions.
+If you upload slides and other resources, we can include them on the talk page
+when your talk goes live. If you happen to have a script or a transcript,
+please include them as well (it’ll speed up the captioning for us).
 
 Please start your filenames with the ID for the talk that it's for:
 ${slugs}.
 
 If you're still working on your talk, you might find the tips at https://emacsconf.org/2022/prepare useful. In brief:
 - at least 1280x720 resolution
-- we recommend light text on a dark background, with enough contrast to make it easy to read
+- we recommend light text on a dark background, with enough contrast to make
+  it easy to read
 - if possible, use a headset or external microphone to record your audio
-- if you can leave 5 seconds of quiet (just background noise) at the end of the video, we can try to use that for noise reduction
+- leave 5 seconds of quiet at the end of the video to facilitate noise
+  reduction for us
 
 Please plan to upload your talk by November 4 (next Friday) so that we
 can get started preparing it for streaming. If you can't make it by