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-[[!meta title="New in hyperdrive.el: org-transclusion, easy installation, and more!"]]
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-# New in hyperdrive.el: org-transclusion, easy installation, and more!
+# New in hyperdrive.el: quick install, peer graph, transclusion!
 Joseph Turner - <https://ushin.org>  xmpp:discuss@conference.ushin.org (XMPP MUC for USHIN discussion), <mailto:contact@ushin.org>
 
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-In case it's been a while since you checked out `hyperdrive.el`,
-here's a refresher: [hyperdrive.el](https://ushin.org/hyperdrive/hyperdrive-manual.html) is an Emacs interface to [hyperdrive](https://docs.holepunch.to/building-blocks/hyperdrive),
-a mutable, versioned, peer-to-peer shared filesystem.  Among other
-things, hyperdrive.el has these features: Share unlimited files of
-unlimited size; Explore file history with built-in versioning; Stream
-video and audio; No signup or account creation; Free as in Freedom!
+[hyperdrive.el](https://ushin.org/hyperdrive/hyperdrive-manual.html) is an Emacs interface to [hyperdrive](https://docs.holepunch.to/building-blocks/hyperdrive),
+a mutable, versioned, peer-to-peer shared
+filesystem. Among other things, hyperdrive.el has
+these features: Share unlimited files of unlimited
+size; Explore file history with built-in
+versioning; Stream video and audio; No signup or
+account creation; Free as in Freedom!
 
-Since [last year's EmacsConf talk](https://emacsconf.org/2023/talks/hyperdrive), `hyperdrive.el` grew some new
-features, most notably the ability to [transclude hyperdrive content](https://ushin.org/hyperdrive/hyperdrive-manual.html#Org_002dtransclusion-integration)
-with `org-transclusion`!  Getting started with `hyperdrive.el` is much
-easier now with `M-x hyperdrive-install`.
+Since [last year's EmacsConf talk](https://emacsconf.org/2023/talks/hyperdrive), `hyperdrive.el` grew some new features, including:
+
+-   Easily install the gateway program with `M-x hyperdrive-install`.
+-   Visualize your network of sources as a graph or a list.
+-   Transclude snippets of hyperdrive files with [hyperdrive-org-transclusion](https://elpa.nongnu.org/nongnu/hyperdrive-org-transclusion.html).
 
 This talk will show off these new `hyperdrive.el` features in action!
 
 Feel free to join our public XMPP chat room!
 
--   xmpp:discuss@conference.ushin.org
-
-([Join anonymously from your browser](https://anonymous.cheogram.com/discuss@conference.ushin.org))
-
+-   xmpp:discuss@conference.ushin.org ([Join anonymously from your browser](https://anonymous.cheogram.com/discuss@conference.ushin.org))
 -   \#\_bifrost\_discuss\_conference.ushin.org:aria-net.org (Matrix bridge)
 
-Bugs can be submitted to the [ushin issue tracker](https://todo.sr.ht/~ushin/ushin). Patches, comments or
-questions can be submitted to the [ushin public inbox](https://lists.sr.ht/~ushin/ushin).
+Bugs can be submitted to the [ushin issue tracker](https://todo.sr.ht/~ushin/ushin). Patches, comments or questions can be submitted to the [ushin public inbox](https://lists.sr.ht/~ushin/ushin).
 
 About the speaker: