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@@ -11,34 +11,34 @@ Robin Templeton (they/them) - IRC: robin, - robin on libera.chat - Matrix: @terp
 
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-The Guile-Emacs project seeks to develop new foundations for Emacs to
-serve as the basis for the next forty years of development. It
-integrates Emacs and Guile by providing a new Elisp implementation based
-on Guile's Lisp-oriented compiler tower and runtime environment.
-Guile-Emacs is being developed by a new, publicly-funded democratic
-workers cooperative, founded to support development of Guile-Emacs
-itself and Free Software in general. We envision Guile and Emacs being
-co-developed in a sort of mutualism, along with other components of the
-GNU system, and for Emacs to become a central part of what we describe
-as "a Lisp machine for the 21st century", and to help fulfill the
-promised role of Lisp outlined in the original GNU Manifesto.
+The Guile-Emacs project seeks to develop new foundations for Emacs,
+building on forty years of development to prepare the way for the next
+forty. Guile-Emacs brings Emacs and Guile together by providing a new
+Elisp implementation based on Guile's compiler technology, serving as
+the basis for a more expressive and extensible version of Elisp. We
+envision Guile and Emacs being co-developed in a sort of mutualism, with
+Emacs becoming the heart of a "Lisp machine for the 21st century" and
+with Guile fulfilling the promised role of Lisp from the GNU Manifesto.
+
+Guile-Emacs is now being developed by a democratic workers cooperative,
+focused on development of the project itself and related components of
+the GNU system.
 
 In this talk, I'll cover:
 
--   What exactly is Guile-Emacs, in terms of its goals and general
-    architecture? What is it, and what is it not? Why is Guile in
-    particular well-suited to the goals of the project?
--   What is its history and current status? What can one already do with
-    Guile-Emacs?
--   What are the immediate tasks for Guile-Emacs development, and how will
-    they improve Guile-Emacs itself and Emacs in general?
+-   What is Guile-Emacs, in terms of its goals and general architecture?
+    Why is Guile well-suited to the goals of the project?
+-   How did the Guile-Emacs project begin, and what is its status today?
+-   What are the immediate tasks for Guile-Emacs development, and how
+    will they improve Guile-Emacs itself as well as its component
+    projects?
 -   How are our long-term goals for Guile-Emacs connected to the spirit of
     Emacs and the GNU Project in general? What do we envision for the
     future of GNU Emacs?
--   How can I get involved with and support this effort?
+-   How can you get involved with and support this effort?
 
-Along the way, we'll show brief code samples and live demos of Guile's
-Elisp implementation and Guile-Emacs itself.
+Along the way, we'll show live demos of Guile-Emacs itself and its
+extensions to Emacs Lisp.
 
 About the speaker: