Add public contact information and introduction to form

1 files changed, 20 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/2023/submit.md b/2023/submit.md
index 289554e4..a93148f4 100644
--- a/2023/submit.md
+++ b/2023/submit.md
@@ -5,21 +5,24 @@ Copyright 2022 Amin Bandali"]]
 [[!template id=pagedraft]]
 
 When you're ready to submit your proposal, send your submission via
-email to <emacsconf-submit@gnu.org> by **Friday, September 14, 2023**, including at
-minimum these essential information:
+email to <emacsconf-submit@gnu.org> by **Friday, September 14, 2023**,
+including at minimum these essential information:
 
 - Your [preferred] name and its pronunciation, and optionally your
   preferred pronouns;
 
-- your availability during the conference days (December 2 and 3,
-  please indicate times and timezone if there are times you are not
-  available between 9AM-5PM America/Toronto) and how you'd like to
-  handle questions (live web conference, IRC, pad, wiki, questions
-  after the event);
+- your availability during the conference days (please indicate times
+  and timezone if there are times you are not available between
+  9AM-5PM America/Toronto Dec 2-3) and how you'd like to handle
+  questions (live web conference, IRC, pad, wiki, questions after the
+  event);
 
-- emergency contact information (such as phone number) in case the
-  organizers need to contact you at the last minute before your talk,
-  or reach you during your talk (for example due to technical
+- public contact information (e-mail, website, social media, etc.)
+  that you would like people to use for questions or comments;
+
+- private emergency contact information (such as phone number) in case
+  the organizers need to contact you at the last minute before your
+  talk, or reach you during your talk (for example due to technical
   difficulties);
 
 - the title of your talk/session;
@@ -44,10 +47,13 @@ filling it out with information about you and your proposal:
 Speaker name (and optional pronunciation) and preferred pronouns:
 
 
-Speaker availability and preferred Q&A approach:
+Speaker availability (times and timezones):
+
+Preferred Q&A approach:
 
+Public contact information:
 
-Speaker emergency contact information:
+Private emergency contact information:
 
 
 Talk title:
@@ -66,6 +72,8 @@ Talk abstract:
 - 20 minutes: (brief description/outline)
 - 40 minutes: (brief description/outline)
 
+Introduction:
+
 Speaker release:
 
   By submitting this proposal, I agree that my presentation at