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From: Sacha Chua <sacha@sachachua.com>
Date: Tue, 30 Jul 2024 13:58:19 -0400
Subject: update sharing

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 [[!inline pages="internal(2024/info/sharing-before)" raw="yes"]]
 
 Ever thought about sharing your Emacs knowledge? Starting a YouTube
-channel, blog, podcast, or even smoke signals to share those tidbits?
-If you’ve answered "No", then I'd like to change your mind. And if you said
+channel, blog, podcast, or even smoke signals to share those tidbits? If
+you’ve answered "No", then I'd like to change your mind. And if you said
 "Yes", then you're already on the right path.
 
 In this talk, I will share what I've learned from my journey as an Emacs
-content creator, including tips, setups (both current and past), and
-various alternatives to get your content out there.
-Most importantly, I'll discuss why your story and perspective matter, even
-if you think otherwise. Your unique experience can inspire and help others
-in the Emacs community.
+advocate, including tips, setups (both current and past), and various
+alternatives to get your works out there. Most importantly, I'll discuss
+why your story and perspective matter, even if you think otherwise. Your
+unique experience can inspire and help others in the Emacs community.
 
 About the speaker:
 
-Gopar, a fellow Emacs user and content creator, will be sharing insights on
-how everyone can become the Emacs Influencer they never knew they wanted to
-be.
+Gopar, a fellow Emacs user and advocate, will be sharing insights on how
+everyone can become the Emacs Influencer they never knew they wanted to be.
 
 From starting a YouTube channel to writing blogs, Gopar will provide
 practical tips and share personal experiences to help you embark on your
-own content creation journey.
-
+journey of sharing Emacs knowledge.
 
 
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