Emphasize Q&A by putting it into its own paragraph

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@@ -129,13 +129,13 @@ Think of 20+ minutes presentation as extensions of the 10-minute
 presentation. If you are aiming at the 10-minute presentation, just
 write an outline of what you plan to talk about if you have 5-10
 minutes. If you’d like to propose a longer talk, add an outline of
-what you might add to the first part if you had more time to present
-(up to 40 minutes, including Q&A).
-
+what you might add to the first part if you had more time to present.
 20 minutes seems to be the best length for a presentation: short
 enough to keep people's attention, long enough to get into some
-details. There will be time for questions and answers after your talk,
-so you don't need to include that in your talk timing.
+details.
+
+There will be time for questions and answers after your talk, so you
+don't need to include that in your talk timing.
 
 Here's an example proposal for a 20-minute talk. Your proposal
 would include the 10- and 20- minute sections: