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@@ -18,10 +18,17 @@ or links to include on your talk page. If you need help, please email
 # Web interface
 
 Go to <https://ftp-upload.emacsconf.org> and enter the password
-**emacsconf** (Javascript required, compatible with LibreJS). You can
-then upload multiple files. You can e-mail <emacsconf-submit@gnu.org>
-with the URL generated by the service, or we can pick up the files when
-we check regularly.
+**emacsconf** (Javascript required, compatible with LibreJS). 
+
+You can upload multiple files by dragging and dropping onto the window
+or by clicking on the green + button at the bottom of the list on the
+left. The default settings are fine. 
+
+When you have selected all of your files, click on the **Upload**
+button. The page will show a progress bar. When the upload is
+complete, the page will display the download URL. You can e-mail
+<emacsconf-submit@gnu.org> with that URL, or we can pick up the files
+when we check regularly.
 
 <a name="ftp"></a>
 # FTP
@@ -82,8 +89,8 @@ EmacsConf 2022 area and publish them when the talk is streamed.
 
 # What if you can't upload the presentation by November 4?
 
-We can accept later submissions, although it's a bit more of a
-scramble. (Our stress levels get higher and higher as the
-conference approaches!)
+We can accept later submissions, although it's more of a scramble.
+Please try to upload your talk as soon as you can. (Our stress levels
+get higher and higher as the conference approaches!)
 
 Thank you for your help in getting ready for a smooth EmacsConf 2022!