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 Jonathan Gregory
 
 LilyPond is an extensible program for producing high-quality sheet
-music engraved with traditional layout rules.  Similar to LaTeX and
-other typesetting programs, its input format simply describes the
-visual layout of the score using commands to define musical
-expressions.  This makes collaboration easier, prevents users from
-having to adjust layout settings manually, and faciliates digital
-archiving and distribution of musical scores.  In this talk, I begin
-by showcasing LilyPond syntax and mode using literate programming
-techniques as examples for building sheet music in Emacs, and proceed
-with an overview of the setup I use for producing music books with GNU
-Make, LilyPond, and LilyPond-mode.
-
+music engraved with traditional layout rules. Similar to LaTeX and
+other typesetting programs, its input format describes the visual
+layout of the score using commands to define musical expressions. This
+makes collaboration easier, prevents users from having to adjust
+layout settings manually, and facilitates digital archiving and
+distribution of musical scores. In this talk, I begin with an overview
+of the LilyPond syntax and move on to showcase ways for producing
+algorithmic compositions and music books using Make, Org and
+LilyPond-mode.